bernhard: server/doc/technical kolabserver.sgml, 1.5, 1.6 openpkg.sgml, 1.8, 1.9

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Author: bernhard

Update of /kolabrepository/server/doc/technical
In directory doto:/tmp/cvs-serv23188

Modified Files:
	kolabserver.sgml openpkg.sgml 
Log Message:
Improved the "Why use OpenPGK?" keeping the same meaning
	so it can be used as a basis for a new text
Added a revision section 1.0.x CVS to show that this is not the original 1.0.1.


Index: kolabserver.sgml
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RCS file: /kolabrepository/server/doc/technical/kolabserver.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- kolabserver.sgml	21 Feb 2003 11:59:02 -0000	1.5
+++ kolabserver.sgml	12 Mar 2004 10:15:34 -0000	1.6
@@ -56,6 +56,10 @@
 <revnumber>1.0.1</revnumber>
 <date>February 21th, 2003</date>
 </revision>
+<revision>
+<revnumber>1.0.x</revnumber>
+<date>CVS</date>
+</revision>
 </revhistory>
 </bookinfo>
 

Index: openpkg.sgml
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RCS file: /kolabrepository/server/doc/technical/openpkg.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- openpkg.sgml	21 Feb 2003 09:06:25 -0000	1.8
+++ openpkg.sgml	12 Mar 2004 10:15:34 -0000	1.9
@@ -9,27 +9,29 @@
 the major Unix server platforms" (cite from the project homepage).
 </para>
 
-<para> The license of OpenPKG is MIT style for the packaging code and a
-mixture of licenses from all the software
-packages which are distributed within the OpenPKG environment. All of those
-licences meet the requirement of the
-<ulink url="http://opensource.org/licenses/"> Open Source
-Initiative</ulink>.
+<para> 
+OpenPGK only distributes Free Software.
+The packaging code of OpenPGK is Free Software under
+a simple, non-protecting Free Software license (X11 style).
+Code coming for packages from other vendors keeps its Free Software license.
 </para>
 
-<para>A major goal for the Kolab server is to not be focused on one single Linux distribution. OpenPKG is designed for having a compatible single
-software repository for open source and free software over different
-Unix flavours, FreeBSD, and all Linux distributions.
+<para>A major goal for the Kolab Server is to not be focused on one single 
+GNU/Linux distribution. OpenPKG is designed for having a compatible single
+software repository for Free Software over different
+Unix flavours, FreeBSD, and all GNU/Linux distributions.
 OpenPKG is also designed to be minimal invasive to the underlying operating
 system.
 </para>
 
 <para> Within the Kolab project most of the server software needs to be
-recent. Unfortunately the major Linux distributions provide the needed
+recent. Unfortunately the major operating system distributions 
+provide the needed
 server software in different and mostly elder releases - for rather good
-and understandable reasons. To achieve the availability of the
-Kolab server on different Linux distributions or other Unix flavours and at
-the same time avoid platform-specific packaging led to a dilemma.
+and understandable reasons. 
+It is a problem to provide
+the Kolab Server and possible updates to many distributions
+and avoid platform-specific packaging.
 </para>
 
 <para>Therefore a decision was made to use the OpenPKG packaging system.
@@ -249,7 +251,7 @@
 
 <para> As most of those packages need to be modified we provide specfiles and a Makefile along
 with some needed patches. So you should not download the OpenPKG RPM files provided
-for that open source projects and use instead
+for that Free Software projects and use instead
 our CVS Versions of the specfiles. All data needed for compilation and installation of the packages
 can be downloaded via anonymous CVS. Of course we do not provide the source packages of all the
 different services. But the rpm build mechanism automatically downloads the needed tarballs from