bernhard: doc/architecture client_client.sgml, 1.5, 1.6 client_server.sgml, 1.12, 1.13 concept.sgml, 1.13, 1.14 server.sgml, 1.26, 1.27 windows.sgml, 1.6, 1.7

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Author: bernhard

Update of /kolabrepository/doc/architecture
In directory doto:/tmp/cvs-serv3720

Modified Files:
	client_client.sgml client_server.sgml concept.sgml server.sgml 
	windows.sgml 
Log Message:
Cosmetics, minor corrections
and bumping version number to 1.9.2 and release date.


Index: client_client.sgml
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RCS file: /kolabrepository/doc/architecture/client_client.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- client_client.sgml	24 Jul 2003 17:24:18 -0000	1.5
+++ client_client.sgml	3 Oct 2004 18:56:28 -0000	1.6
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@
 gets updated
 and later published.</para>
 <para>There is a special mode that must be used by the KDE client when 
-communicating with a legacy
-Windows Outlook/Bynari client. In this case calendar events are sent as plain
+communicating with Microsoft Outlook. 
+In this case calendar events are sent as plain
 MIME email with
 the iCalendar data being the body of the email. This non RFC-conformant mode is not
 recommended by the

Index: client_server.sgml
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RCS file: /kolabrepository/doc/architecture/client_server.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- client_server.sgml	3 Oct 2004 04:34:17 -0000	1.12
+++ client_server.sgml	3 Oct 2004 18:56:28 -0000	1.13
@@ -8,8 +8,9 @@
 Force (IETF,
 http://www.ietf.org)</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>
-open standard in the sense of the term open source</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para> existing open source software implementations must
+open standard in the sense that a Free Software implementation is available
+</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para> existing Free Software implementations must
 scale very well</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 <para>In general simplicity is preferred over complexity. The
@@ -107,8 +108,8 @@
 webinterface available via HTTPS provided by the Kolab server. The actual
 vacation
 functionality is implemented on the server
-using Sieve (IETF RFC 3028). A open source implementation of this scripting
-language
+using Sieve (IETF RFC 3028). 
+A Free Software implementation of this scripting language
 for the Cyrus IMAP daemon is available.</para>
 <para>
 Note that Sieve's capabilities reach far beyond a simple vacation functionality.
@@ -161,9 +162,8 @@
 <para>
 Calendar entries are represented as multi-part MIME messages with
 the information stored in the Kolab XML format. In addition to the XML part a
-client may choose to store data in an additional MIME part. E.g. both the
-Toltec Connector and the Konsec Outlook Connector chose to use an additional
-TNEF MIME part.
+client may choose to store data in an additional MIME part. E.g. the
+Toltec Connector chooses to use an additional TNEF MIME part.
 </para>
 <para>
 The Kolab clients must preserve any unknown MIME part and any unknown XML tag.
@@ -636,7 +636,7 @@
 also the correct content is generated.
 </para>
 <para>
-An extension to the traditionl SMTP message handling is the configurable Kolab
+An extension to the traditional SMTP message handling is the configurable Kolab
 feature to be able to verify the
 SMTP sending address of the sender against a whitelist. This whitelist is looked
 up

Index: concept.sgml
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RCS file: /kolabrepository/doc/architecture/concept.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -d -r1.13 -r1.14
--- concept.sgml	11 Jul 2004 19:24:15 -0000	1.13
+++ concept.sgml	3 Oct 2004 18:56:28 -0000	1.14
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 <bookinfo>
 <title>Kolab Free Software Groupware Project</title>
-<subtitle>Architecture Paper Version 2 (Draft)</subtitle>
+<subtitle>Architecture Paper Version 1.9.2</subtitle>
 <authorgroup>
 <corpauthor><inlinegraphic entityref="erfrakon" fileref="erfrakon"></inlinegraphic> </corpauthor>
 <othercredit>
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 <othername> email: info at erfrakon.de </othername>
 </othercredit>
 </authorgroup>
-<pubdate>April 21th, 2004</pubdate>
+<pubdate>October 3rd, 2004</pubdate>
 <legalnotice>
 <para> This documentation was written in SGML using the DocBook DTD. HTML
 and Postscript output is generated automatically and depends on the
@@ -40,11 +40,7 @@
 <trademark class='registered'>Insight Connector</trademark>
 is a registered trademark of Bynari Inc.
 <trademark>Toltec Connector</trademark>
-is a trademark of Toltec Inc..
-<trademark>Konsec Connector</trademark>
-is a trademark of Konsec GmbH.
-<trademark class='registered'>Aethera</trademark>
-is a trademark of theKompany.com,
+is a trademark of Radley Network Technologies CC.
 <trademark class='registered'>HotSync</trademark>
 is a registered trademark of Palm Inc..
 <trademark>K Desktop Environment</trademark> and <trademark>KDE</trademark>
@@ -100,6 +96,11 @@
 <revision>
 <revnumber>1.9.1</revnumber>
 <date>April 21th 2004</date>
+</revision>
+
+<revision>
+<revnumber>1.9.2</revnumber>
+<date>October 3rd 2004</date>
 </revision>
 
 </revhistory>

Index: server.sgml
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RCS file: /kolabrepository/doc/architecture/server.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.26
retrieving revision 1.27
diff -u -d -r1.26 -r1.27
--- server.sgml	9 Sep 2004 20:20:47 -0000	1.26
+++ server.sgml	3 Oct 2004 18:56:28 -0000	1.27
@@ -1388,7 +1388,7 @@
 
 </sect2>
 
-<sect2><title>Open Source Antivirus Scan Engine ClamAV</title>
+<sect2><title>Free Software Antivirus Scan Engine ClamAV</title>
 <para>The costs of scanning for viruses and other malware skyrocks while the quality of many proprietary
 virus scanner option declines. A special problem is here the need for the supplier of proprietary software for
 diversivication. This leads to technically suboptimal solutions like large and unreliable

Index: windows.sgml
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RCS file: /kolabrepository/doc/architecture/windows.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -d -r1.6 -r1.7
--- windows.sgml	13 Apr 2004 03:35:05 -0000	1.6
+++ windows.sgml	3 Oct 2004 18:56:28 -0000	1.7
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 <chapter><title>Windows Kolab Clients</title>
 
-<para>There are multiple Kolab clients on the Windows platform including the venerable Bynari 1.x Outlook Connector, the 
-reliable and trusted Toltec Connector for MS Outlook and the upcoming Konsec Connector.
+<para>There are multiple Kolab clients on the Windows platform 
+including proprietary plugins for Outlook like Bynari 1.x and
+the Toltec Connector.
 </para>
 <para>
 The mainly tested Windows client application to cooperate with the Kolab Server 2.0 and the KDE client Kontact is
@@ -61,4 +62,4 @@
 before Outlook.
 </para>
 </sect1>
-</chapter>
\ No newline at end of file
+</chapter>