bernhard: server/kolab-webadmin/kolab-webadmin/php/admin/templates/en kolab.tpl, 1.6, 1.7

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Author: bernhard

Update of /kolabrepository/server/kolab-webadmin/kolab-webadmin/php/admin/templates/en
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Modified Files:
	kolab.tpl 
Log Message:
Fixed some minor meaning bugs.
Shorted some paragraphs.
Some line reformatting.


Index: kolab.tpl
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RCS file: /kolabrepository/server/kolab-webadmin/kolab-webadmin/php/admin/templates/en/kolab.tpl,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -d -r1.6 -r1.7
--- kolab.tpl	16 Aug 2004 09:42:42 -0000	1.6
+++ kolab.tpl	16 Aug 2004 10:49:34 -0000	1.7
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
 <div class="contenttext">
 <h1>Kolab2 Groupware Server</h1>
 <p>
-Kolab2 is a Free Software project developed by the
+This is the Kolab2 Server.
+It is Free Software developed by the
 <a href="http://www.kolab.org/">Kolab Project</a>, with
 the intention of bringing groupware functionality to
 Unix/KDE users as well as Windows desktops.
@@ -45,12 +46,12 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-In order to fully utilise all the features of a Kolab server a
-Kolab-compatible groupware client is required. The KDE Kolab Client was the
+To use all Kolab2 features you need an interoperable client.
+The KDE Kolab Client was the
 first such client to be developed and is still considered the reference
-platform for others to follow. For Kolab2 the KDE Client has evolved into the
-Kontact project, which provides a native groupware application for the KDE
-environment. Many thanks to the <a href="http://www.kde.org">KDE Project</a>
+platform for others to follow. 
+The KDE groupware component Kontact can act as Kolab2 Client.
+Many thanks to the <a href="http://www.kde.org">KDE Project</a>
 for providing such a powerful base on which to build this client solution.
 </p>
 
@@ -58,18 +59,21 @@
 Users of Outlook on Microsoft Windows are able to use a proprietary plug-in to
 inter-operate with the Kolab server. For Kolab2 the preferred plug-in is the
 <a href="http://www.toltec.co.za/">Toltec Plug-in</a> by Radley Network
-Technologies CC. Joon Radley has also worked closely with the Kolab community
+Technologies CC. Radley has worked closely with the Kolab community
 to help develop the Kolab2 storage format.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-A list of additional Outlook plug-ins that provide interoperability with the Kolab
+A list of additional Outlook plug-ins 
+that provide interoperability with the Kolab
 server is <a href="www.kolab.org/kolab-plugins.html">maintained on the Kolab
 website</a>.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-There is also a <a href="http://www.kolab.org/webclient.html">web-based client</a>
+There is also a 
+<a href="http://www.kolab.org/webclient.html">web-based client</a>
+in development
 which provides full groupware functionality to mobile users through a web
 interface. It allows users to access their email, calendars, tasks, etc. from
 anywhere in the world, by simply connecting through a standard web browser.
@@ -78,22 +82,24 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-While the Kolab Server was born out of contract work, its Open Source/Free
-Software nature allows anyone to help extend the functionality. As such, an
-active community has developed around the software with many people
-throughout the world contributing. The project was originally started in 2002
+Kolab being as Free Software project, anyone can help to 
+extend the functionality of the software. 
+An active community has developed 
+around the software with many people throughout the world contributing. 
+The project was originally started in 2002
 by by a joint-venture of three companies: <a href="http://www.erfrakon.com/">erfrakon</a>
 (design, architecture and server);
-<a href="http://www.intevation.de">Intevation</a> (project management and client quality assurance) 
+<a href="http://www.intevation.de">Intevation</a> (project management) 
 and
-<a href="http://www.klaralvdalens-datakonsult.se/">Klarälvdalens Datakonsult</a>. 
+<a href="http://www.klaralvdalens-datakonsult.se/">Klarälvdalens Datakonsult</a> (client). 
 </p>
 
 <p>
 <a href="http://www.codefusion.co.za/">Code Fusion cc</a> joined the project
-soon after the original Kolab1 server was released, and have been active in
-its development ever since. They are primarily responsible for an updated
-engine (which forms the base of the Kolab2 server), the web client, as well
+soon after the original Kolab1 server was released.
+Its developers are primarily responsible 
+for an updated engine (which forms the base of the Kolab2 server), 
+the web client, as well
 as contributing to development of the Kolab2 storage format.
 </p>